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She had changed. Alot. She looked at me through the flames as if in a trance. She looked like a cat ready to pounce on prey. Her neon blue eyes, her dazzling black dress, and her black layered hair. In a word she was perfection. Soft skin, graceful walk, flirtatious attitude.
The fact that just last year she was the exact opposite of this new girl shocks me. The Livy I remembered never wore dresses, had blond hair, and her eyes weren't as electrifying. I knew it was her because of the dragon tatoo on her neck. She said it symbolizes her feirce attitude and persona. But that was when we were together. Then she moved away. Now she is back and i can hardly believe it.

Chapter One

I had to find a way to talk to her. I was with my date, Jessica,  that night and i figured it wouldnt be good to leave her to talk to Kira. I didnt want any jealousy between the two.       Then as if on cue Kira stood up and motioned for me to follow her. I told my date that i would be right back, and followed.
She walked on to the balcony of the restraunt and i followed. I was nervous. She was even more stunning in the moonlight. Her skin almost white, it faintly shimmered.
" Hello," she said "You remember me right? Its Kira."
"Kir-" was all i could manage. Her teeth were as white as snow. And her eyes were glinted with hunger and happiness.
"You look like you have seen a ghost," she laughed, " Im here and im coming back to Chicago."
I was lost for words. She was coming back. I would be able to see her again. Then i fought myself to realize that she wasnt the same as  i had remembered her being. She was very different and i had to find out why. Very soon.

Chapter 2

I found a letter in my locker the next day at school. Kira had wrote it. It said:

Well i have found your locker. And i often leave notes for people. So how has life been in the past two years? i know i have changed. ALOT! im not that little helpless girl that i used to be. i am stronger now. Anyways, i am writing you to ask you if you want to hang out and catch up?
Call me! 330-592-2147
Sincerly,
Kira


I turned around to go to my next class and she was right behind me. Smiling. Her teeth amazingly in line and white, like a first winter snow.
"Jeez. You shouldnt sneak up on people like that." i said.
"Im sorry,"she said so innocently it just wasnt right,"It wont do that again."
She bound away so gracefully it seemed to hypnotize me. i made it through the day, got home, and called her.
"Hi!" She answered as if she knew it was me.
"Kira. Hi. Umm well whats up," i probably sounded like a nervous wreck,"When do you want to hang out?"
" i will be right over."
i was about to object but the line went dead. Five minutes later the doorbell to my apartment rang.
This is a story i have been secretly writing for 2 years.. its from a guys poiny of veiw.... idk his name.. you can choose that for your own perposes...
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